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I know you don't expect a bunch of 5/5 and 10/10 but I will honestly say if this is colored well and finished, than I will give those scores to it... You did great but for feed back, finish it because it is definitely worth finishing... I gave it a passing score, and it'll probably pass, so that should definitely be enough proof you need to... If it doesn't pass, finish it, and it looks like it'll be like a well rated amatuer chobits...
Author's Response:
hey thanks man..I willd efinetly finish it...mmm not sure about colours tho...I'd like to keep it b&w to keep the mood. thanks a lot for your feedback. if you feel like it , please check my showreel.
http://cristianortiz-crom.blogspot.co m/2009/06/show-reel.html
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But this game is a total lose game! you gotta take time to Reload... Too much time... And if you are the High score holder of your own game, we all know only you know how to play it... Make a tutorial, and do it by the wave atleast... This game has a good foundation, but make it gradually get harder, not make people in hell the moment they start... I hope you take this in consideration...
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I hope you understand english because that was awesome! Muchos awesome! I would add english to it because alot of people feel comfortable about a flash that is multi languaged but me personally I love it! Muchos Amora! I know my espanol isn't great but I hope you understand it!
Author's Response:
Ha ha thanks a lot! :)
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I knew this was a remake of mario paint's mini game before I clicked it... I will give a 10 but listen to my suggestions... Have transitions between stages, and on each one warn you what each bug is capable of... Also when stung, do an animation on the mario paint's hand screaming! That way you know you were hit without having to take your eyes away from the game to view your lives... So far even a super nintendo game's version is better but I just gave you pretty much what you need to make it good! And another thing... More exciting music please... Maybe flight of the bee or something? I really hope this helps... It'll pass, but the score may not be in the blue... The green is possible, but like the olympics go for gold, and on Newgrounds go for Blue!!!
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Good use of vanishing points, and good sprites, but way too short to really keep you interested... Make it longer, with more action than the speedy attacks of the show... Give the viewers your own explanation in a way... Maybe make it slow down to show punch by punch and block by block... I hope this helps you make a great movie! I am a fan of DBZ, so I will be waiting...
Author's Response:
lol
k thanx ill keep that in mind...i might do sumthin like high speed and if some other DBZ char is watching ill make it through their eyes(normal speed)...wow now u got me all riled up
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Tried multiple times too lol... This is creepy... Unless... You changed the cards that were displayed to fool the mind that they were looking for their card lol... That is my guess... But still amuzing...
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The guy looks like my best friend lol... And don't listen to these idiots giving you 1's and 0's... Not only is it funny, but the animation is just amazing... Keep up the great work, and I really look forward to the next S13 submission!
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I let my girlfriend help me cook parmesan chicken once, and instead of using 2 cloves, she used 2 heads... We came up with the joke that we could kiss a vampire and it'd be lethal for the next 10 years... This video made me laugh because of it, so I couldn't help to give you a good rating, besides the good animation quality as well...
Author's Response:
So it worth the time making this movie :D
Thanks for the score :)
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I think the clerk could have been a little more enthusiastic... Maybe a really awkward facial expression, because you know that he has to feel like an ass... Maybe he is since he can't give a bum a damn macaroni meal lol... I still give this high scores because over all it was a very funny joke, and the bum really caught me off guard when he said I'll just go die in the kid's toy section lol... Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response:
hahahah, awesome thanks man!
ill work on more enthusiasm for the next one! more facial expressions - check :-]
ahaha glad it cought you off guard too :-D!
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But you gotta position your mouse as soon as you hit play or game over... That part is poorly made so the likeliness of anyone getting any kind of enjoyment is 0... Do some more work, than maybe you'll get a better score....
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